Should mobile phones be allowed in school? Mobile phones are thought of as a distraction to schoolwork so most schools ban them, but are they? Without thinking people don’t see that phones can be really beneficial. Pupils can use their phones as a way to contact emergency services and parents/careers. mobile phones can also be used as a learning aid and research tools. Overall I think it would be a good decision to allow the use of mobiles in school.
May 13, 2014 at 10:04 pm
Good use of rhetorical question in your opening sentence. You have also added a few plausible arguments for why mobile phones should be allowed in schools, however, I feel that your arguments are far too few to make an impact or to persuade someone take your side. You need to add more arguments and use more persuasive techniques to do this. You many also bring the opposing argument ,but then counter it with your own stronger points use of language devices. Very well done, nice work.